I have a house in my hometown. My house is not small but not large too.
My house is really comfortable. I have little yard in front of my house. I have
several plants in there like starfruit tree, banana trees, and the other
plants. My house has twelve rooms. There are guest room, family room, three
bedrooms, kitchen, little mushola, two bathrooms, private room, dining room,
and locker room. My house has two floors. In the first floor there
are family room, dining room, locker room, kitchen, little mushola, bathroom,
and two bedrooms. In the second floor just only bathroom and private room. The wall
and the floor in my house are not painted, but overall were made of ceramics. Beside
my house, I have little farm. I have some chickens in there and they are very
fat and healthy because the environment of my house was very clean and very
healthy. I'm really feel comfortable and relax in my house
In your last sentence : "I'm really feel comfortable and relax in my house", you use two verbs (am and feel). You must reduce one of the verbs. So, the sentence become : "I really feel comfortable and relax in my house".
ReplyDeleteIt's a very complete explanation Mr. Adam, but here I just wanna give you an advice. You mention part of rooms twice. In the 7 line you generally mention all of the rooms whether is it in the first floor and second floor. And in the 8 line you tell us that it has 2 floor then you mention about what rooms are in the first and second floor. Maybe you can make it little bit simple when you just explain us you have two floor and the first floor contains of living room, etc and in the second floor there are private room etc. Just suggesting anyway
ReplyDeleteIn the second floor just only bathroom and private room = There are only bathroom and private room in the second floor.
ReplyDelete"in there" just write "there". for example "here" is correct. it is not "in here"
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