I have a friend who names is Arif Nur Hidayat, and I called him Arif. He is 21 years old in this year. He has straight hair, and he uses glasses. He is very kind and funny person. His hobby is photograph, so he is a photographer. He likes spicy food. Sometimes, I play with him in his home. He also like plays game. So if I go to in his home we usually play many kinds of games. But sometimes we go out together for vacation. We go vacation by motorcycle, we like go anywhere by motorcycle because, its the easiest transportation to ride and do not need long time to go.
i think the sentences"and he uses glasses"
ReplyDeletebetter if u use"uses"="wear"
I think wear is for apparel, not stuff..??
Delete"who names is ..." can be changed to "who names..."
ReplyDelete"he like plays..." can be changed to "he likes to play..."
" go to in his home" can be changed to "go to his home" just put one prepotition...
at all, u're writing is good...
whooaa, I have many mistake -,-", I need more practice again. . .
DeleteYou can change "we have a vacation' in "we go vacation".
ReplyDelete...by motorcycle because, it's the easiest...
ReplyDeleteYou must place the commas before "because".
...by motorcycle, because it's the easiest
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